Good potential, but...
The main component of this song seems to too strongly overpower anything else in it. Maybe lower the volume on that part to let the other pieces of the song shine through? (Or, conversely, increase the volume on the other parts.)
Either way, from the tiny bits I CAN pick out besides the main, overpowered part, it seems like it'd sound pretty good once polished/rebalanced. =)
Very nice. Also, reminds me of something...
The song is quite well made indeed. Also, might you know of this game series known as Touhou Project? It might just be me, being a fan of it myself, but... The title and description you put make me thing of a place in Gensokyo(The land Touhou games/other swtuff takes place in) known as the Bamboo Forest of the Lost, and a mischievous rabbit spirit known as Tewi who can manipulate luck.
Either way, I do like the song on its own, too, not just as potentially-but-likely-not-Touhou-ins pired. As the person below me said, very calming.
Interesting, catchy, but...
About the only thing I can see wrong with it, as you alluded to in your description, is the bass. It feels slightly overpowering. Only slightly, but it's noticable.
All in all, still quite good, IMHO.
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