Well synced, descriptive, and altgether enjoyable
I thought that the way you used the song was brilliant. also, did you really dislike that one teacher THAT much? I mean, wow. The symbolism on this movie was pretty cool too. Great work. Now I should check some other stuff out, too.
Really good, only a thing or 2 for me to mention..
I really liked the animation; you're obviously VERY skilled at using the program. There were only 2 things that I can see as POSSIBLY needing improvement.
1. The relationship: I think that it moved a little fast. If Hikaru and what's-his-face(Can't recall his name at the moment...) had gotten to know each other better, it would have made the fighting later on have more of an impact, since it would be like, "Yeah, that guy's REALLY gonna be ticked at seeing Hikaru kidnapped. Time for him to go kick butt and take names."
2. The translation: I'm not going to criticize you for having the English be imperfect, given that I'm guessing it's not your first language, but maybe you could, for the next episode, hire on someone who DOES speak primarily English to read over the words you use, to see if there's a better way of doing it, or if you might have made a mistake at the time.
All in all, the flash was really good and the storyline has me hooked already, wondering what's going to happen with the two stars. I look forward to seeing how this series develops.
Excellent flash. What do you mean it's not great?
I gotta say... While the flash was short, and lacked a general story(Unless that's a real event in CT, that is, but I don't own the game), it was top-notch work. (I've been watching Flash for a few years now, so I figure I'm a good person to rate things like that). I thought it was kinda comical how that frog dude(Isn't he NAMED Frog?) was just spitting bubbles and then used this huge blast of energy. THAT was cool. Also, I like how Crono did that Matrix-esque flip off the wall. (I'm a fan of Matrix-y stuff like that) All in all, a great job. Hope to see more outta you! (Also... You did this in a week? Wow. )
Really cool. Gotta be the best spoof ever made!
That's true, too. (What I said in my title). You even got to do it as a school project! That's cool. I hope you got like a 110 at LEAST! Top grade stuff there. Also, Pensuke's cool! I like his sword. ;) (The only reason I gave Interactivity a three is because asll we did was hit a button or use the nav bar...)
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